Thursday Doors gifts: Spain & a door poem

Door gifts never stop giving. Today’s photos were taken by my travelling uncle who was in more than three towns in northern Spain this April, just that the doors are only from three.

But first, my first piece for Dan’s Third Annual Thursday Doors Writing Challenge which runs by the end of May. The door photo I chose among the many fabulous doors on offer in the TD Writing Challenge gallery is by Susan Rushton. Two more poems to two more doors will be coming up on two following Thursdays.

Photo: Susan Rushton
Who’s who

It clearly says above this door: “A. Division. Police Station”, see? It’s not amusing when police divides and doors bear witness, is it? Look: even those lions pull and tear apart that coat-of-arms, what gives? No respect, no fear – this door stands here and watches mob pass by with paints. They stop, they paint, lions’ heads are punched in anger or in jest; they run. Divided police peek through their holes, embarrassed, seeing, not knowing. They never asked, nobody told them – how could they know? – so then: who’s Ku?

This poetic form is called American paragraph and is made of American sentences. I didn’t know before this April that American sentence was a thing, no matter how much Allen Ginsberg I used to read as a youth. But apparently a 17-syllable sentence is supposed to work better for Americans than a classic 5/7/5 haiku. I’m neither an American nor a haiku enthusiast, but I thought I’d try out this form.

The American paragraph was invented by David Bogomolny who blogs at The Skeptic’s Kaddish. I learned of it at NPM Scavenger Hunt, this is why I share this poem on both sites as well.

But this is nothing, look what Dan wrote to my green door! Astonishing! Mr. Andrej Lesjak needs to be told. And K. tackled the same door from other angles.


Next, I’m grateful to my uncle and all who have eyes for doors, and then click, and then even send me the photos.

Before we go to Spain, let’s make a quick stop in Belgrade, the capital of Serbia and of former Yugoslavia which was by a giant miracle the united country of Slovenians, Croats, Serbians, Bosnians, Herzegovinians, Montenegrin, Kosovars, Macedonians and I’m sure more could be found (Vojvodina people!). And it was Marshall Josip Broz Tito who kept us all in check. My travelling mother (my uncle’s sister) and her witch friends (which is how they call themselves!) stopped by his grave. This is history in the making.

Photo: The 5th witch. Belgrade, Serbia.

On to Spain now and its three towns, as I said before. Don’t know about Jaca and Lumbier, but Pamplona is definitely a city. The first five photos in the gallery below are from Jaca, the next seven from Lumbier, and the rest from Pamplona, including happy uncle among his beloved cervezas, which is Spanish for beer.

And finally, with so much Europe covered I can only wish you much fun with the Eurovision Song Contest tonight and on Saturday. I don’t have a favourite this year but trust me – weird things are going on. Oh, the Czech ladies are cool. And I can’t get that cha-cha-cha out of my head after listening to the Finn. 😀 As for Slovenia… let’s see if it’s time for a surprise Joker Out.

All photos by uncle Matic, northern Spain, April 2023

For Thursday Doors challenge hosted by Dan at No Facilities

Published by Manja Maksimovič

A Slovenian in Italy for love. Blogger, photographer, translator and would-be writer who would be a writer if she wrote. Plus reluctant but emerging poet. Beware.

35 thoughts on “Thursday Doors gifts: Spain & a door poem

    1. Thank you, David! I was just about to leave the link on your site as a proof that somebody else has tried the American paragraph. 😀

      The police station photo is by Susan Rushton and there is no additional information provided. So we can only guess…

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  1. Your uncle certainly knows what to send you when he travels – these are great doors.

    I didn’t know an American sentence was a thing, either, but I love your poem. I think the lions would approve as well.

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    1. Thank you, Dan. The lions are tired from getting punched. I love this challenge, the door selection, and the fact that we can do what we want. I never wish to read others before I finish my contributions, but this year I hurried so they are all ready to be posted and I can read.

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      1. I’m glad. It’s funny you mention not wanting to read. I’m the same way, but of course, I feel obligated to read. Unlike you, I did not get a head start, so I’m trying to wiggle in with my stories.

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  2. You’ve trained your uncle well! That black door would make for a good story I think. and the beer door would be just right for my brother.
    I think that Police Station label is just a decoy. The real question, as you noted, is “who’s Ku?” (K)

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  3. I saw the title of the post and thought you were traveling to Spain. How nice to have an uncle who travels and sends you door pictures. I remember seeing this door in Dan’s writing challenge.
    Enjoyed the ‘American’ poem. Had no idea such a type existed. Thank you,Manja, for this interesting post 💕🙂

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    1. Thank you, Smitha! I have never been to Spain at all. So yes, I’m extra grateful to uncle. I haven’t checked if you posted another batch of your sister’s Morocco doors. I loved the first post!! Just today I was gifted several Morocco doors as well by one of my mother’s witch friends. 🙂 Will post them next week.

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      1. ‘Mother’s witch friends’😀…wow, I’m so glad you got more Moroccon doors. I was feeling bad when my set of doors finished. This week, I have doors sent to me by my daughter😀. Looking forward to your post this week.

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  4. Fascinating about former Yugoslavia and all the countries it used to contain. This is probably a silly question but do you think it’s better that they’re all independent or do you think it was better before? Love that photo with the “witches” as you put it 🙂

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    1. Haha, they call themselves witches, happily so. Well… You know how it is. Some say everything was better before, but it was because society as such was better, more positive, more naive, more giving. I was 21 when Slovenia got independent. I was more against it than for it then, but I guess with time we all have to do it.

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  5. Hmm, I didn’t know American sentences were a thing either. It is a sad, distressed, even under attack doorway and you communicated that well. The irony being that it is a police station, or at least a former one. Incredible collection of doors by your uncle, Manja. They are very unusual. I especially like the stone buildings and the fifth door with the small balcony above it. I hope you have a nice day!

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