Today is a good day, the Mavs won even without Luka to tie the series against the Jazz 1 : 1, birds are happy, the spiral looks up, these are my trees and here is my poem.
Prompt 19: “Today’s challenge is to write a poem that starts with a command. It could be as uncomplicated as ‘Look,’ as plaintive as ‘Come back,’ or as silly as ‘Don’t you even think about putting that hot sauce in your hair.’“
What is poetry See, this poem starts here. There is no other time. It knows no other than first me, then you, and now this. Look how it peeks at all there was because each poem has a history, tactile memory, the treasure chest of the senses. It doesn’t exist in the vacuum. It has travelled. Watch where it goes from here. The poem decides how it shall end. It is tempted to spiral downwards with the devil and lose, upwards with the angels and lie. A small bit of what was, a big bit of what is, a small bit of what is coming. Have you noticed? This poetry, so much like life.
The last day in my NaPoWriMo history
2018: Reconstruction
As if the happiest door saw for the first time three years made into one – notice how fresh improvement was done with the mouth or is it cheek? Here is the entirety again, now decidedly murky.
2019: Abeceda
A bright, clear day: each fascinating gaze held immense joy. Kid let mother near. Opening pores. Quest ran smoothly to universal victory. Warmly, xoxo, yours, Zero.
2020: Otherness
“The limits of my language mean the limits of my world,” said he. Now the limits of my world are the limits of my home. “Hell is other people,” said he. Now hell is still other people, even more so. I was always picking this and that, a stone, a shell, a leaf. None in the last two months. My camera does all the picking. I touch nothing.
2021: Male gaze
Goodbye then, unknown man on the internet, one in a billion, I never loved you but I had to kill you, you and your male gaze, no matter that I know men will gaze just like lions will gazelle. Or in the words you quoted and will be the last I ever see: “Everybody is left where they made a wrong turn.” (Read all.)
This day in my blogging history
2014: Glimpse, by Janez Janša (with my translation. This is NOT political promotion. The guy tried.):
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When my soul is food for moths open the closet door and send them flying When my thoughts come looking for a way to return from the afterlife embrace them (Read on.)
A start, a middle and an end. That’s it for sure Manja 🙂
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I love your poem and your trees–and yes, this poem has traveled and look! it’s growing a tree inside me.💜🍃
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Poetry plus nature . . .dear to my heart!
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Indeed it has travelled, and met me in Germany!
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It is! (and Niki too) (k)
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Thank you, K. Niki knew much about life, and art.
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Indeed she did.
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No need to define it. Poetry is felt.
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Oh, by all means, Bojana. Nobody told me I had to do it. This rolled out of my mind immediately after seeing the prompt. It made sense so I wrote it down.
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And I’m glad you did.
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I love this Manja, it’s just like lives journey
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I’m glad you agree, Not Pam. Sometimes it goes smoothly and sometimes we need to push a little… Thank you!
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Oooh, I love this: “A small bit of what was,/ a big bit of what is,/ a small bit of what is coming.” That is a beautiful recipe for a poem, which always “starts here.” And I love the beautiful trees reached skyward. Just like the Mavs!
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Love this post! 😊
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Really quite profound, Manja. Love this whole section especially:
“Look
how it peeks at all there was
because each poem has a history,
tactile memory,
the treasure chest of the senses.
It doesn’t exist in the vacuum.
It has travelled. ”
You describe the flesh and the soul of the poem. No one could ever put it better than this 🙂
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I swear, Sunra Nina, I didn’t recognise these verses and had to read the poem in full to remember even writing it. All these poems that I wrote in my bed immediately upon seeing the prompt or after waking up seemed to jump at me without my will. Extremely curious. Thank you for this high praise. How do they say: move away and the art will make itself?
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Ha ha! I love that saying! It’s a little similar to: “get out of your own way.” What an excellent habit to check the prompt on waking and then write what comes. I didn’t always get the chance to but it’s the best time to create. Which may explain why the result feels like it was written by someone else because your higher brain wrote it?
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Quite. I should let my higher brain take over finally. 😀
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